#210400 - It’s essential to get the title correct. I made a slight edit to the story, put an explanatory paragraph in at the start and re-submitted it as ‘A good hard spanking for Sue!’ Nobody could have any doubts what that was about, could they? As I write this, the story in its original format has been read 5012 times and has had ‘no comments’ but the new version has had 7152 reads and has attracted 6 comments! Point made, I think! So, what do you need to write a story? You must have imagination. Try to see both sides of the conversation if you do insert dialogue.
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