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#356495 - Think what sort of audience you hope to attract (and what use they will probably make of your story ………. I made a slight edit to the story, put an explanatory paragraph in at the start and re-submitted it as ‘A good hard spanking for Sue!’ Nobody could have any doubts what that was about, could they? As I write this, the story in its original format has been read 5012 times and has had ‘no comments’ but the new version has had 7152 reads and has attracted 6 comments! Point made, I think! So, what do you need to write a story? You must have imagination. almost as if we were enjoying a quiet drink together and I was giving a good friend a bit of advice! Right! Imagine that you’re telling yourself a story; try to imagine the dialogue and make it realistic.

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